I really enjoyed the concept of your game and I think that you were able to create an interesting story with what you have so far. The writing is definitely the strongest part of your gameplay. *When you enter in full screen mode, the design of the page gets smaller, more stretched out, and shoved to the top of the page. You may want to look at the code to see why this is happening. *The choice of asking the young boy about the night sky made the screen go black and said "access denied". This may have been due to the page not being done yet. I am using Chrome as my browser. #I would suggest adding some more design or imagery to the game so that the user is more immersed. If you could create an interactive image where whichever image is chosen continues the story, I think it could create some variety that would be nice for the user. Good job!
I had some issues with moving forwards in the game. I kept getting the error access denied when attempting to move forward within the story. This happened on multiple tries to run through different story options.
# Maybe changing the page links to a different color besides blue could help. It is a bit hard to see what is presented. I love the depth of the pages you have done though!
*Going "full screen," the text becomes very small and the options go to the left of the screen. I feel centering this would make the game appear more visually appealing and increasing font size would make it easier to read.
# I would recommend changing the color of the options. Right now, they are very dark and hard to read. Likewise, adding hover effects would add an interesting interactivity to the game book.
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I really enjoyed the concept of your game and I think that you were able to create an interesting story with what you have so far. The writing is definitely the strongest part of your gameplay. *When you enter in full screen mode, the design of the page gets smaller, more stretched out, and shoved to the top of the page. You may want to look at the code to see why this is happening. *The choice of asking the young boy about the night sky made the screen go black and said "access denied". This may have been due to the page not being done yet. I am using Chrome as my browser. #I would suggest adding some more design or imagery to the game so that the user is more immersed. If you could create an interactive image where whichever image is chosen continues the story, I think it could create some variety that would be nice for the user. Good job!
#In full-screen mode the text is pretty small and it is kinda hard to see the different options, I would change to a lighter color
*when I clicked 'future' the page crashed
I had some issues with moving forwards in the game. I kept getting the error access denied when attempting to move forward within the story. This happened on multiple tries to run through different story options.
# Maybe changing the page links to a different color besides blue could help. It is a bit hard to see what is presented. I love the depth of the pages you have done though!
*Going "full screen," the text becomes very small and the options go to the left of the screen. I feel centering this would make the game appear more visually appealing and increasing font size would make it easier to read.
# I would recommend changing the color of the options. Right now, they are very dark and hard to read. Likewise, adding hover effects would add an interesting interactivity to the game book.
* The image when clicking "Past" is off to the side rather than in the middle.
* when i clicked on "talk to farmer" the code broke and took me to an access denied white scree